Welcome! This week, we're writing to the word prompt "gut". I have another episode from my latest historical romance titled, "Sam's Decision." The book is being written now. When you finish reading my snippet, hop on over to the other authors and read their works. You'll find them HERE.
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“What?”
Benjamin asked.
Sam put his finger to his lips, then
pointed. Half a dozen ducks swam silently from one edge of the pond to the
other, ducking from time-to-time to scoop up a tasty fish. The men cocked and shouldered
their muskets.
The clicks alerted the birds. They
picked up their heads and spread their wings. With a cacophony of quacks, they
took off, flying across the water. Sam and Benjamin aimed and fired. Two ducks
fell into the pond. Seconds later, the men took aim again. The ducks were
farther away but they each managed to hit a second one.
“Lucky! Fetch!” Sam called, gesturing.
“Patches! Duck!” Benjamin said,
pointing.
The dogs sprang into action. The men
sank down, reaching for their pouches of cider while the dogs chased down the
fallen birds. After a long drink, Benjamin leaned back to rest against a tree.
“Your sister’s with child.” He took a
long draught.
“What?”
“You heard me.” Ben put down his drink.
Sam swallowed then gazed at his
friend. “It’s about time, Fitch. Guess you finally figured it out, eh?” Sam
grinned.
While he laughed, Benjamin took a
swipe at his friend’s shoulder. “At least I’m doing it, you ain’t. Are you?”
Benjamin cocked an eyebrow.
“Watch it, Fitch. She’s my sister.”
Ben snickered. “And she’s my
wife.”
Sam raised his arm to slap his
friend, when Lucky and Patches interrupted. They dropped the ducks from their
mouths and raced back to the pond to get the last two.
Sam stuffed his duck in a sack.
“Anyone else know?”
“My mother and father. Your mom and
Caleb. No one else. You’re the first. Outside of my family. You and Doc.” Benjamin
shook his head. “I wanted to wait. Be sure. Ya know? But Sarah insisted.”
“Now you’re sure?”
Ben nodded. “She’ll probably be mad I
told you.”
“She’ll get over it.” Sam stuck out
his hand. “Congratulations, Ben. You’re
going to be a father.”
A wide grin spread across Benjamin
Fitch’s face. “Yep.”
“Bet your mother
and father are happy.”
“Happy? They are plum loco about it.
You’d think we’d invented the wheel or something. Geez. People have children
all the time.”
“Yeah, but now ole Elizah’s got an
heir.”
“If it’s a boy.”
“True.” Sam nodded. “And if it’s a
girl, I guess you’ll have to keep trying.”
Benjamin laughed. “Fine by me.”
Sam punched Ben playfully in the gut. “My
sister. Careful.”
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Love this scene. Great job.
ReplyDeleteWhat fellowship between those two friends! I love the woods scene with the duck hunting and dogs and then how such important news comes out.
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ReplyDeleteLove this one. Good buddies and great relationship
ReplyDeleteThis is a great snippet. I so enjoyed reading this and seeing the comradery between the two. Well done!
ReplyDeleteLove the banter between them. It sets up the story of their family and their relationship. And love the pups! Great job!
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