Howdy do and Happy New Year, y'all. Today our word prompt is "song". We're back with an excerpt of "Two of Hearts", but Jen's story today. And not steamy. Everyone can cool down with this one. Thanks for stopping by. Don't forget to visit the talented authors of Tuesday Tales HERE.
The trip to the hospital seemed to take an eternity. In the
elevator, she checked her watch again. Only five after nine. She was in plenty
of time. She blew out a breath, then drew one in when the doors opened.
Listening to her heart beat as she approached intensive care, she held her
breath.
Pushing
open the door, she felt as if time had stood still. Everything looked the same
as the day before. If she looked closely, she could see that Stan had a little
more color in his face. She kissed him. A nurse burst in.
“The
doctor will be here at ten.”
“Thank
you. I’ve been praying that he wakes up.”
“We’re
all with you, Mrs. Hogan.” The woman squeezed her hand.
“Thank
you.”
Jen went over to the window and stared up at the sky. Clouds were clearing and the sun had poked through. Wasn’t that a good omen? the song, "Blue Skies" came to her. To avoid the pressure building inside her, she hummed a few bars. Before she finished the chorus, the door opened. It was Doctor Harrison.
“Mrs.
Hogan.”
“Doctor.
I’m ready.”
“I hope
Stan is.” The doctor fiddled with the bottles and tubes going into Stan’s arm.
“That’s it. Final dose removed. Now we wait.”
She sat
in the chair next to him, silently praying.
“I’ll
check back in an hour. I must warn you that your husband might be confused,
even angry when he comes out. If he tries to rip the breathing tube out, get a
nurse right away. The longer someone’s under a medically induced coma, the more
irrational they can be when awakened. So don’t expect him to wake up, like he
has every day, and ask you what’s for breakfast.”
“Okay.”
“Are you
sure? And please don’t try to wake him. Let him come to naturally. I’ll be back
in half an hour to check on his progress.” The doctor stood.
Jen
shook his hand. Fear spiked inside her. She chastised herself for being afraid
to be left alone with Stan. This was her husband. The man she adored. Stan—how
could she be afraid?
Jen’s
hands trembled as the doctor and nurse approached Stan’s bed.
“Wait!
Wait for me!” It was Marcy. Lillian hung back, standing in the doorway. That’s
right. She no longer had a right to be there. Jen narrowed her eyes.
“Stand
back, Marcy. Let the doctor do his job.”
The
young woman shot her a nasty look. Beyond caring what her stepdaughter thought
of her, Jen focused on Stan.
The
doctor read Stan’s chart, examined his eyes, shining a tiny flashlight in them,
smiled and put his hands in his pocket.
“Any
time now. I’ll be back.” He and the nurse left the room.
Looking
up, Jen glanced at the door. Lillian was gone. Jen was almost glad to see her
stepdaughter.
“Did you
hear what the doctor said?”
“I spoke
to him in the hall,” Marcy replied. Her eyes filled. “Why doesn’t he wake up?”
“Stop
it! He will. You’ll see.”
That's all for today. Thanks for visiting.
I went through this with my dad. The wait is so hard. Great scene.
ReplyDeleteGreat job of showing her fear, and we feel it right along with her. I'm glad the doctor warned her what his reaction may be.
ReplyDeleteI can feel her nervousness about the whole situation. And why am I afraid that Marcy will mess everything up? Great job!
ReplyDeletegreat work this week. Can feel her anxiety and I sense some drama headed our way as this unfolds.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene! I was all wrapped up in the tension of it all and her nervousness. And then the step-daughter appearing. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens.
ReplyDeleteI love how you worked the prompt 'song' in. Well done!