Good day! It's time for another another snipped from "Two of Hearts" today. This is a woman's fiction story. There is bad language, so if that's a big turn-off, simply go on to the next author. Find more Tuesday Tales HERE. Thanks for stopping by.
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Grinding his teeth, Terry directed Queenie down seventy-seventh street. An hour in nicely-wooded Central Park would do him good. At least that’s what he told himself. Clare had insisted that Queenie not be short-changed on her park exercise.
“Just because I’m not going to be here doesn’t mean she should miss out. Right?”
In
theory, he’d agreed, but the reality of spending an hour at the crack of dawn
trudging around the Great Lawn every God damn morning pissed him off. Bad
enough he didn’t have his wife but picking up after the pooch and pretending to
like it set his teeth on edge.
He and
Queenie tromped toward the park, when a low rumble met his ears. Oh, shit. Rain. He raised the collar of
his jacket and hunched up his shoulders. After a loud crack, the sky opened up.
Queenie howled as the rain came down in sheets, drenching them. Terry ducked
into an alcove, the front entrance of a townhouse. Queenie shook off on him.
“Shit!
Fuck! Queenie!” He yelled, closing his eyes.
“Nice
language,” muttered a woman, squeezing in next to him, her dog stepping on his
foot.
He
looked down. “Willie?”
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Jen
pushed her wet hair off her face and pulled her soaked T-shirt away from her
skin. She didn’t need to show strangers her boobs. Sure, April showers and all
that crap, but this was ridiculous. Yesterday had been the first dry day in a
week. Stan had always done the morning and late-night walks with Willie. She took
him in the afternoon. The poor pug was soaked. He shook off and panted, his
long tongue lolling.
“Come
on, boy,” she said, pushing farther into the entryway of the townhouse. The man
next to her took up most of the space. Screw
him. She elbowed her way deeper under the narrow overhang, pulling Willie
up close. Life was terrible. Everything was shit and she’d be damned if some greedy
asshole was going to make her day worse.
“Willie?”
The man asked, narrowing his eyes and staring first at her dog, then at her.
Instinctively
she pushed at her hair, but it was too wet and matted to fix.
“Yeah.
This is Willie. Who are you?”
“This is
Queenie.”
Jen
looked down. There stood an adorable pug, much smaller than hers. At the
mention of her name, the wet dog ginned. Jen smiled back.
“Queenie?”
She raised her eyebrows.
“Your
father usually walks Willie, doesn’t he?”
She
bristled, frowning. “You mean my husband? Stan usually takes the morning and
late- night walks.”
The man
blushed. “Oops. Sorry.”
“You
should be.” She wasn’t putting up with annoying behavior from anyone today.
“We
don’t usually talk. Just say ‘hello’ and let the dogs play. His name’s Stan?”
“That’s
right.”
“Did he
sleep in?”
“He’s in
the hospital.”
That's it for today. Thanks for stopping by.
Greet scene and the end holds quite the punch! Well done.
ReplyDeleteLoved this snippet!
ReplyDeleteOoh, this is intriguing! Beautiful scene with the rain, their frustrations, close proximity, "in common" aspects, and the sweet dogs. Poor Queenie- dutifully walked but not fully loved by her papa.
ReplyDeleteahhh, dog parents... recognizing the dog and calling him by name. Love it.
ReplyDeleteHmmmm, something is telling me that this chance/accidental meeting is important in some way. Must, Keep. Reading. Want to know more!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet!
I love her! I love Jen’s spunk and I love how she puts him in his place. Great job!
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