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The
meal was fabulous. The only thing to interrupt pleasant talk were the sounds of
chewing. Barbara beamed at the “ums” and “ahs” of happy diners. In years past,
when Dale had brought home one of her “charity cases”, her relatives had been subdued.
Like the visitor had intruded and brought everyone down. But not with Robbie. He
bubbled. His enthusiasm permeated the atmosphere. Her relatives responded.
“Which dish did you make, Robbie?”
Angela asked.
“None. I just helped. Like with the
pie.”
“Then don’t be taking credit for the
food. If you get my meaning.”
Silence followed.
Robbie stopped, his fork loaded with
stuffing halfway to his mouth. A second later, he put the food in his mouth and
chewed. After he swallowed, he broke the heavy silence.
“That’s right, Angela. I can’t take
credit for Barbara’s amazing cooking. I was just the bus boy.”
“That’s not true. Robbie was my right
hand. We’d never have gotten all this food to the table on time and so
perfectly cooked if he wasn’t with me in the kitchen every step of the way,”
Barbara said.
In the ensuing silence, Dale noticed
a touch of color creep into Robbie’s cheeks. This is what a mother does, defend
her chicks.
“Well, I say ‘bravo’ to Robbie for
helping create his incredible meal,” Scott said. “Mom, you and Robbie outdid
yourselves.” He burst into applause.
Everyone else at the table joined in
except Angela. Wearing a pouty expression, she threw her napkin on her plate,
pushed her chair away from the table and got up. Without a word, she flounced
down the hall. Dale heard the slam of the guest room door.
Conversation resumed. Funny stories
past and present filled the air. With the focus off Robbie, Dale slipped her
hand over his in his lap and gave it a squeeze. If she worried about him being
able to handle himself, that vanished like a mist in the summer sun. He
squeezed back and shot her a warm gaze.
May I have permission to smack Angela into next week? What a cow! Great scene.
ReplyDeleteWhat a witch with a b! Certainly doesn't live up to her name. Glad Robbie handled her so well. Great scene.
ReplyDeleteWhat crawled up her butt? I love how everyone is interacting with him but I’m dying to know what her problem is. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI love the way Robbie fits in with the family. You have made their interactions so engaging. Angela, of course, needs to learn manners!
ReplyDeleteWow, someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed! Grea job.
ReplyDeleteAngela is being a little snot. It didn't seem to put a damper on the rest of the family liking Robbie so much. I'm glad to see him fitting in so well.
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