When the game was over, C
The Coach slapped him on the back.
“Great game, Anthony.”
“Thanks.”
“Whatever you’re doing different,
keep it up.”
Robbie nodded. He could hardly wait
to try out some ideas on Dale his teammates had shared.
“Flowers,” Griff Montgomery said.
“Listen, really listen to her. Then
repeat something she said the day before,” Buddy said.
“Take her to a chick flick.”
“Take her to dinner, but don’t make a
pass at her.”
“Make a picnic in front of a fire in
the fireplace and keep your hands to yourself.”
“Be respectful.”
“Don’t touch her.”
“Ask her about her day.”
“Call her up just to talk.”
Robbie put all the suggestions into
his phone. When he got home after the game, he reviewed the advice while he chowed
down on a take-out steak dinner.
When he finished eating, he picked up
the phone. He dialed the number he had for Dale, but it went straight to
voicemail. It was her work number. Damn! He didn’t even have her home number.
He shook his head. He’d have to use
what he had.
“Hi, Dale. Sorry to call on your work
number, but I don’t have your cell. I was just wondering how your day went
today? I saw you had a full schedule before the game. I hope you’re relaxing now.
Maybe watching a movie or something? Just thinking about you and how hard your
job is. Here’s my number, in case you ever want to talk. Bitch about stuff or
whatever.”
Robbie added his number and ended the
call. He face-palmed and exerted all his control to keep from throwing his
phone against the wall.
“I sound like an idiot! Like some
twelve-year-old asshole who doesn’t know shit about women,” he said aloud,
shaking his head. “This will never work. Why did I have to fall for her?”
I hate it when I have to leave a voicemail. I think I sound like an idiot, too. Great scene..
ReplyDeleteMaybe what he thinks of as sounding lame will tweak her interest. I'm hoping! Love his process.
ReplyDeleteWonderful excerpt!
ReplyDeleteLol! He doesn't know anything about women! LOL! Had to put the suggestions in his phone. He knows how to be a player but not someone who can truly relate to women. Can't wait to see his growth.
ReplyDeleteOh, he's a goner for sure. Love how he put all the tips and suggestions in his phone. Great scene!
ReplyDeleteSo he admits it! I love the detail of him putting their suggestions in his phone. That says player all over it. Great job!
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