Welcome to Tuesday Tales! This week's word prompt is "bare". Hmm, lends itself more to a spicy story, doesn' it? But it also fits into my sweet historical, "Sarah's Dilemma". So here's the excerpt. Don't forget to read the other stories by talented authors. Find them HERE.
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Sarah
nodded. She rose from the bed and snatched her shawl off the chair. After
wrapping it tightly around her, she took her brother’s arm. Quietly they
tiptoed out the backdoor and toward the home of their half dozen chickens. The
moon hid behind a cloud, making their path uncertain. They slowed down to keep
their footing.
“Sam? That
you? Sam Chesney?”
Sarah and
her brother stopped suddenly.
“Who’s
there?” The darn moon refused to budge.
“It’s me,
Josiah Quint.”
“Josiah!
Well, well.” The moon finally popped out, shining on Josiah’s hair, turning it
to black silk and shadowing his handsome face. Sarah’s heartbeat quickened.
“And Miss
Chesney, too? I’m a lucky man.” He shot her a dazzling grin.
She did a
little curtsy, then grimaced in pain.
“You were in
the schoolhouse fire, weren’t you? Let me help you.” Josiah took her arm. She
leaned into him, relaxing against his strength. Sam yanked her away. She
stumbled along a few yards, then stopped.
“Watch it!”
Sam growled.
“Ow! Sam!”
Pain seared through her.
Josiah
pushed his buddy away. “Leave her be.” He picked her up and hustled over to the
garden bench. He laid her down gently.
Swept away
by his gallantry, she clung to him, her mind confused her body awash in
feelings so strong she barely had the strength to murmur, “Thank you.”
“She needs
rest. What are y’all doing out here, anyway?”
Josiah took her hand in both of his. She met his gaze and raised her
palm to cup his cheek.
“Lay off my
sister, Quint!”
“Oh, shut
up, Sam. Ain’t doin’ her no harm. She’s been hurt.”
Sam quieted,
easing down on the bench next to Sarah. He slid his arm around her shoulders.
“Sorry,
Sarah. I didn’t mean to hurt you.”
Josiah
rested back on his heels. "Do I have to ask you again? What are you doing
here?”
Sam picked
up one of the goatskin pouches hanging from his belt. “Got us some grape wine.
Enough to share. Want some?” He pulled out the stopper and handed it to Josiah.
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That's it for now.
Interesting scene. You've given us a lot to think about. How was she injured? Her brother is certainly overprotective. The ending was unexpected.Well done.
ReplyDeleteOh no! Sarah’s been hurt! I love Josiah’s protectiveness of her. I kind of want to slap Sam and tell him to leave them be. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteGreat scene with excellent visuals and subtleties in the emotions and dynamics. Looking forward to seeing how she copes with her attraction and that over-protective brother.
ReplyDeleteOh no, she's been injured! I do like how protective Josiah is of her. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful scene! I loved it all - except for the fact that it ended too soon. I wanted to see more of the interactions between the three and what follows next. You've wrapped me right into the story.
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