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“What’s wrong?”
“He’s
not Stan. Not the man I married.”
“What do
you mean?”
She
sniffled, dipping into her pocket for a tissue. “He’s, he’s feeble. Feeble is
the only word to describe him.”
“Feeble?
Hell, lady, the guy just woke up from a coma. Do you expect him to run a three
minute mile?”
“ I expected
him to talk, be forceful, criticize everything, declare he was going home and
no one could stop him. To be masterful, strong, determined. But he wasn’t any
of those things. He was meek. Stan Hogan, meek? I never thought I’d see the
day.”
“Give
him a chance! A chance to bounce back.”
“Do you
really think he will?”
“Hell,
Jen, it’s the first day. You need to be patient.” He unsnapped Queenie so she
could sniff Willie’s butt.
“Patience
has never been my strong suit.”
“Things
change.”
“I know.
And for better or for worse. I guess after five years of great, I could learn
to deal with a bit of worse.”
“Nice
talk! What would Stan do if the situation were reversed?”
She
laughed. “Either he’d be crushed and fawning all over me, or he’d just walk out
and hire someone to take care of me.”
“Well?”
“Well,
what?”
“Maybe
you could hire someone to help you when he comes home. He is coming home, isn’t
he?”
“The
doctor is optimistic.”
“Have you eaten anything today?” Terry asked.
She
scrunched her face up. “I think I had a breakfast sandwich on the way to the
hospital.”
“Hell.
You can’t deal with this on an empty stomach.”
“I
couldn’t possibly eat anything.”
“Wait
here,” he said, handing her Queenie’s leash. He ran back to the apartment and
grabbed the white bag on the credenza. Huffing, he slowed as he neared the
woman and the dogs. Queenie barked and wagged her tail.
“One for
me, and one for you,” he said, plucking two cream puffs out of the bag.
She shot
him a quizzical look.
“Cream
puffs. Yeah, not exactly healthy food, but guaranteed to make you feel better.”
She
smiled. “If you say so.”
He took
a small bite of his, to make it last. Yes, it would help with the fact that
Clare hadn’t been home and hadn’t called back. He took another bite and let the
superb cream roll around his tongue.
That's it for this week. Thanks for stopping by.
Excellent post. You convey her anger and frustration very well. Dealing with stuff like that is hard.
ReplyDeleteYou depict her emotions so well, and he was a good friend with the way he talked and brought her to a better frame of mind. The little tidbit about his wife not calling gave us insight into him. Despite feeling low, he spared time and energy for this hurting woman. Good idea, too-- that cream puff!
ReplyDeleteI love how he encourages her to have faith. And a treat to cheer her up too! I wasn’t a big fan of him in the beginning but now I really like him. Great job!
ReplyDeleteNicely done. I like that he got her a treat and encouraging words to try to cheer her up
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