Tyler threw off the covers and slung his legs over the side. He yawned, scratched his stubbly face and pushed to his feet. A hot shower woke him up. He shaved and put on a long-sleeved navy-blue T-shirt and his best light blue jeans. He needed to look reasonably well put together. His former principal was a stickler for neatness and cleanliness.
He remembered kids being sent home to change if they were too grungy. And he banned out-of-control facial hair. He checked the thermometer outside the kitchen window. Eighteen degrees. He shrugged on his down jacket and kissed his mother on the cheek. He pocketed the keys to Charlie's car and got behind the wheel.
Dread
constricted his stomach. How could he eat when his anxiety level was over the
top? What was he so worried about? It's not like Mr. Forge could do anything to
him, right? He couldn't get expelled or anything. So what was the big deal? He
took a deep breath and let it out slowly. Still, his stomach knotted. He'd
always craved approval from Coach Forge and Principal Forge. In high school,
he'd worked hard to achieve respect.
Could
one stupid game loaded with idiotic mistakes really destroy what he'd worked
years to build? It seemed that way. He pulled into the small parking lot and shut off the car. He
took another deep breath, swallowed and got out. Muttering to himself the
words he always said while running out on the field to kick, "I've got this."
He
opened the door. There was Andrew Forge, sitting by a frosty window, always drafty. He shuddered. Nervous and then freezing. Not a good combination.
"Morning,
Mr. Forge." Tyler plopped down into the booth seat opposite.
"Morning. Whatcha having this morning?" Mr. Forge asked.
"What
did you order?"
"My
usual. Vegetable and cheese omelet and sausage."
"Oh.
Ok." Tyler didn't need to even glance at the menu on the table.
"Have
whatever you want. Build yourself up. I'm assuming you'll be practicing
today."
Tyler
nodded. Winnie came by, holding a pot of hot coffee. She dropped a menu in
front of Ty. "Coffee?" she asked, turning his mug over.
"Thanks.
Yeah."
When
she finished pouring, she spoke. "Whatcha having?"
"Pancakes
and sausage, please."
"How
many?"
"Stack.
That's three?"
"Right.
Coming up." She plucked the menu from the table and scurried away.
"Good
choice. Carbs for energy."
Tension
gathered in his shoulders. "Okay, Mr. Forge. Can we dispense with all this
good manners and stuff? What do you want?"
"I
just wanted to talk to you about what went wrong in Las Vegas." Andrew
picked up his mug.
"I
don't know what went wrong." Tyler added a touch of milk to his coffee.
"I
have an idea."
Brilliantly done! I can see every movement of his getting ready and feel his anxiety and emotions. I feel for him and root for him. Great choice of putting Forge by a frosty window.
ReplyDeleteWell done! What a great snippet.
ReplyDeleteExcellent scene, a real slice of life. I felt his nervousness and understood his desire to get to the matter. Bravo.
ReplyDeleteso much anxiety. Well done on the tension here.
ReplyDeleteAn excellent snippet! I felt like I was sitting on his shoulder watching it all unfold in front of me.
ReplyDeleteI had to jump ahead to know what his thoughts were. I can feel his nervousness to talk to his coach. I can’t wait to see where he goes from here. Great job!
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