Welcome! This week we have another episode of the kicker's story. The word prompt is "careful". Any form of the word is acceptable. Don't forget to visit all the author's blogs and read their stories. You can find them HERE. Thanks for stopping by.
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Tyler noticed the Forges across the room. He checked his watch. They'd been there an hour, maybe he could escape before Coach and his brother wandered over.
He simply couldn't face them. Not now, not on Christmas Day. He gathered up the dirty paper plates, used napkins and other trash. Before he could escape to the garbage can, Andrew Forge appeared behind him.
"Before
you leave, Tyler. We need to talk."
"But
it's Christmas Day?"
Andrew
stroked his smooth chin, looked down at the ground, then raised his eyes.
"True. I don't want to spoil the holiday for your mother and uncle."
Ty
let out a breath.
"How
about tomorrow? Meet me at Java the Hut at nine. Is that late
enough? I don't want you to miss any beauty sleep."
"Nine.
I'll be there. Thanks."
Andrew
Forge slapped him on the shoulder and ambled back to his brother's table.
Tyler
turned away and packed up his stuff. Maybe
men didn't shrivel up when they got older. Look at Andrew Forge and Uncle
Charlie? Both tomcatting some woman – and at their age! Tyler shrugged. Maybe his life wasn't totally over yet,
despite Brittany.
"Ready,
Ma?"
"I
just want to thank Flint and Marty. I'll be right back."
Tyler
eased his coat over his shoulders. Thank God it was time to leave. No one had
bothered him about getting fired-yet. And he'd carefully avoided talking to anyone in the
Adams family, until a familiar voice came up behind him.
"Hi,
Ty. Avoiding me?"
Hair
on the back of his neck stood up. He pasted a sick smile on his face and
turned.
"Oh,
hi, Courtney."
Great scene. No one wants bad news Christmas Day. I can empathize with his wanting to leave and avoid awkward topics. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI feel for him-- being upset and trying to tiptoe around to keep the topic off the table. He makes the reader pull for him. Great job!
ReplyDeleteOooh, I feel for him and then boom! Courtney which does not bode well!! Eep!
ReplyDeleteOh dear. What does SHE want?? He needs to banish her. I can' wait to read the next snippet and see where this goes.
ReplyDeleteUgh! I’m almost afraid of what they have to say to him. Great job!
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