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Charlie
parked the car, took the plate of cookies, and Marge's elbow, helping her
across the nasty, slick ice coating the firehouse parking lot. Tyler picked up the bag and followed
along behind. Once inside, his mother and uncle were greeted by their friends.
When she hurried over to
the dessert table, she drew a small crowd. As she placed the confections down, she laughed with her
friends. Tyler watched from across the room. He loved her too much to be
jealous, but his heart ached to have the same welcome from friends in his life.
His teammates weren't beating down his
door to wish him happy holiday. Most of them shot him looks of disgust
as he cleaned out his locker. He'd let them down big time. No one else had
fucked up as badly as Tyler. In football there's no bigger pariah than a loser.
He'd gone from winner to loser in a matter of minutes. From savior to saboteur,
from star to the bottom of the barrel in two quarters.
For
the first time he'd doubted his own talent. He'd had two teams negotiating with him before he picked the
Las Vegas Gamblers. He shook his head. What a mistake! He'd thought that Las
Vegas would be a much better city to live in than Pittsburgh. Hah, he'd been
totally wrong.
He'd
almost considered moving back to Pittsburgh and going back to Rugger's, the bar
he frequented when playing for the Bulls. He discarded the idea. No matter how
nice they'd be, and he knew they would try to ignore his disaster, no one wants
to hang around a failure. So he'd stayed in Pine Grove. Now he'd have to face
the people there.
He
picked up the bag and walked quickly over to the Christmas tree. One-by-one he
pulled out the Secret Santa gifts. His small package was last. He held it in
his hand for a moment. Pain seared through him. He'd counted on Brittany.
Another mistake. He sighed. That package had represented so many hopes
for the future. Now it was simply a Secret Santa bauble. He tossed it on the
pile, folded up the shopping bag and looked for a chair. He found one in the
corner and plopped his sorry ass down.
"Didn't
you get any food?" His mother wandered over.
He
shook his head. He had no appetite.
"They
have all your favorites. Ham, turkey, mashed potatoes, green beans. Even Cassie
McKay's cranberry relish!"
"I'm
not hungry, Mom."
"I'll
get you a plate. Just wait here."
"Thanks,
but I'm really not…"
"Don't
think you're gonna get fed like this at home! Go on, then. Get your own plate.
You can't mope around with that attitude all the time and quit eating. Whatever it is, let it go
for now, will you? It's Christmas."
He looked toward the food table. Was that Uncle Charlie? The man was laughing, gesturing, and
chatting like he was thirty years younger. Tyler narrowed his eyes.
"I'll
be damned," he muttered to himself as he wandered across the room. Charlie was flirting with Madge Adams, Courtney's mother. Tyler chuckled to himself. Those
Adams women held the Bentley men in the palm of their hand.
Great scene. The uncle seems to be quite the character. Looking forward to more.
ReplyDeleteWhat a good snippet! That uncle does seem to be quite the character as Susanne said. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI love seeing the community spirit and interactions in your stories. This one is no different. Except...I'm jumping up and down on the edge of my seat wanting to see her face when she opens her Secret Santa gift!
ReplyDeletePoor guy. I feel for him- I hope he finds the holiday spirit. I somehow think his uncle will help him!
ReplyDeleteI love that last line. And I am completely intrigued by the back story. I can’t wait to see what happens! Great job!
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