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“Baseball
is all Ethan can talk about since we got home from Pine Grove. He’s begging me
to take him to a game.”
“Really?”
“You had quite an impact
on him. I think he really misses his father.”
“Understandable. We have
a local minor league team. The Jefferson Jaguars. If you want to come out, I’ll
scout up tickets.”
“Really? That would be
fantastic.”
“Consider it done. Just
give me a couple of dates.”
“I’ll text you.”
Marty lost track of time.
Playing ball with Ethan, helping with the barbecue and cleaning up afterward
ate up his afternoon. By eight o’clock he was on the bus. His phone rang.
“I’ve texted you twenty
times. Called you five. Where the fuck have you been?”
“Oh, Flint. I’m sorry. I
had my phone in my briefcase.”
“Wonderful. I was ready
to call the FBI and report you missing! Listen, you dick, don’t ever do this to
me again.”
“I’m sorry. You’re right.
I should have called. I’m on the bus now.”
“I hope the sex was good. Tell me that at
least the sex was good.”
“There was no sex. I played ball with her
son and listened to knock-knock jokes from her daughter, Sophie, ate homemade soup, two hot dogs and
a hamburger.”
“Jesus! No sex?”
“You heard me.”
Flint chuckled. “Sounds like you had a great time.”
“And I brought in some business, too. I think
she’s going to use us.”
“You didn’t give her a quote yet, did you?”
“Nope, but whatever she gets, we’re going
lower.”
“Oh, really?”
“Even if I have to make up the difference
myself.”
He heard laughter. “From my tight-fisted
brother, that’s love.”
Marty chuckled. “Can’t talk. I’m on the bus.
Pulling in at ten thirty.”
“I’ll be there.”
Click. Flint hung up. Marty stared out the
window, but all he saw were lights in people’s windows in large apartment
buildings. Families, husbands, wives, kids –reading bedtime stories, washing
up, getting ready for sleep. Men and women, preparing for love. He sighed.
Loneliness washed over him. Didn’t matter what time he got home –except for his
brother, no one knew where he was or even cared.
That last line crushed me. So powerful. Great scene.
ReplyDeleteUgh! I can feel the longing he has for her and the loneliness he is experiencing. Such deep emotions! Great job!
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh that last line was SO darn sad. Well done!
ReplyDeleteAww, he needs a family life. I hope this relationship works out well.
ReplyDeleteI'm with the others. The last line put a knife in my heart, aching for him.
ReplyDeleteAww. Great post. He clearly likes her and so sad at the end.
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