When Don took the boys for ice cream, Allison watched
the elephants. One of the elephants sprayed his handler with water from a
bucket. The man ripped off his shirt and went inside. The site of his naked
back brought up a flashback. It was the day of the last street fair. Don had
been in the dunking booth. A teenager had finally hit the mark and he was
drenched. After climbing out of the water, he stripped of his shirt.
She remembered staring at his back, his perfect back.
She’d never seen him shirtless before. Desire had raced through her, tingling
every part of her body. He kept talking to her, then turned around. She thought
she’d have an orgasm right on the spot.
The memory of his physical perfection lit old flames. It
had come before the big event, but led up to it. Her sudden physical awareness
of him way beyond simple friendship had embarrassed her so much, she’d made up
an excuse and fled.
She stood at the railing, unseeing, old, dormant
feelings coursing through her veins anew as if she was a horny teen. She sensed
a flush creep up her chest to her face. Had she ever wanted Spencer the way she'd wanted Don on that hot, steamy afternoon in the schoolyard? Talk about
inappropriate!
Don returned with the boys in tow. They said something
she didn’t hear. He touched her shoulder.
“Hey, Allison? You all right?”
She nodded, not trusting herself to speak.
“You’re all red. Let’s find some shade.”
He led them to a bench under a tree. But shade wouldn’t
fix what was wrong with her. She made an excuse and hurried to the ladies’
room. Maybe splashing cold water on her face would help. And maybe it wouldn’t.
Sounds like she could do with a dousing from the elephant! =D Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteWell done. Vicki's right. An elephant dousing might be just what she needs.
ReplyDeleteYou did an excellent job of depicting her attraction to him and the resulting embarrassment. I hope she's able to splash her face, calm her fears a bit, and relax with him. Looking forward to more of these two!
ReplyDeleteOh, I really want to know what the big event between them was now. And I agree with everyone else. I think she might need the elephant more than the bathroom sink at the moment. Great job!
ReplyDeletethis made me smile. Dashing off to the ladies room. I, myself, have never seen a back that would affect me that way, but it is now a goal in life. :)
ReplyDeleteAh! I have a feeling splashing the cold water on her face is not going to help the situation! Great scene!
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