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Tongue-tied, she checked the battery on her cellphone. Anything to avoid his probing stare. She didn’t think she’d ever see him again, yet here he was, sitting next to her on a bench, just like old times. How many benches did they warm in the schoolyard afterschool? Or in the park on weekends? The kids played and they sat and talked, and talked, and talked. The conversation started off polite –where you went to school, where you grew up –boring.
It was but a month,
if she remembered right, before conversation got interesting. Politics,
marriage, sex – no topic was off limits. New to marriage, motherhood and the
Upper West Side of Manhattan, Allison had come from Nebraska seeking a Master’s
degree in literature at Columbia.
Spencer Wyman had
been her professor, mentor, and advisor. Totally swept off her feet, she was
married and a mother within two years –her degree forsaken in favor of raising
Robbie and catering to Spence.
Don had become her
first friend and confident in New York. A second time parent –though he swore
raising a girl was different—he had plenty of sound advice for a nervous
first-time mom.
At the end of the second
grade, their friendship came to an abrupt halt. Allison and Robbie left without
so much as a “goodbye.”
Sitting next to
Don, she felt the heat of his stare, anger burning just below the surface. How
long would it be before he asked the question? She guessed maybe thirty
seconds. Smiling to herself, she’d nailed it.
Oooo this is just crackling! Well done. I wonder why he left as well...
ReplyDeleteNow that's a great set up. The perfect amount of backstory for the cliffhanger. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI love it! Can't wait to hear why he left, too.
ReplyDeleteOooh, the electric moment! I'm looking forward to more of this. Their energy together is delicious.
ReplyDeleteA perfect balance of undercurrents of sizzle tempered with ballast carried from the past. Great scene!
ReplyDeleteOh, I can’t wait to learn more about these two! There is so much tension. And I want to know why she left too. Great job!
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