Welcome! This week our word prompt is "win." We have an excerpt from a new story, tentatively titled "The Kiss," Scroll down to return to Tuesday Tales. Thank you for stopping by. Comments are always welcome.
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Allison
settled into a seat on the subway for the long ride to the Bronx Zoo. She was
meeting her twelve-year-old son, Robbie, there. Good memories of long days
spent at the Zoo with Robbie and his best friend five years ago washed over
her. Recalling the feel of his small hand in hers as they walked from exhibit
to exhibit brought a smile.
Now, he barely
spoke to her. Surly teen years had kicked in. He preferred the company of his
friends. Of course, it was normal, still, she was grateful he’d agreed to meet
her. Thinking back, the happiness of those days filled with joy warmed her.
A fulltime wife
and mother, she’d strolled in the park with Robbie. Or stopped at the
playground, to push him on the swing or dig in the sandbox. His love and
affection had brightened her life.
As the train
pulled into her stop, she rose. She was still ten blocks from the Zoo. As she
walked, she thought back. Did she have any regrets? Oh, sure, she probably
could have made better choices raising Robbie, but her mind wandered to one big
decision she’d made, the one she’d regretted every day since.
Always early,
Robbie stood at the entrance.
“Hi, Mom. What
kept you?”
“We don’t live so
close anymore.”
“Here’s the map.
Let’s start at the reptile house,” Robbie unfolded the paper.
Allison made a
face. “Five years later and I still don’t like reptiles.”
“Wait outside,
then.”
Frowning, Allison
agreed. She followed him, wishing he wouldn’t be so selfish and take her
feelings into consideration. Teenagers. She plopped down on a bench outside. Basking
in the warm May sun and no wind, she unbuttoned her jacket.
“I’ll be back.”
Robbie hurried over to the entrance.
He met a boy there
and they went in together. Although she didn’t get a good look, there was
something familiar about him. Not surprised he’d made plans to meet a friend,
too, she shrugged and took out her phone to read.
“Well, hello.” A
deep, masculine voice broke into her thoughts. “Imagine meeting you here.”
She looked up into
beautiful, smiling blue eyes.
“Don? Don Walters?”
Then the lightbulb went off. Of course. It was Alex Walters who went into the
reptile house with Robbie. He was five years older and she didn’t recognize
him.
“Imagine running
into you here. After all these years.” He shifted his weight.
She patted the
bench. “Please sit down.” Her pulse zoomed into overdrive as he joined her. The
man hadn’t changed a bit, being as gorgeous as ever.
“Good to see you.”
His warm smile spread heat through her.
“Somehow I don’t
think this was a coincidence,” she said.
He laughed. “Ya
think?”
I'm with her. The reptile house isn't my favorite part of the zoo. So, the kids are trying to set up their parents? Interesting. Great intro to the new story.
ReplyDeleteOh I remember those ages. I love the introduction. I’m dying to know what her regret is - and more about Don. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteHer emotions about the regret and her son growing older and more remote are so well written. I like the way the boys apparently set up the parents. Intriguing!
ReplyDeleteWonderful post! I love seeing kids playing matchmaker.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene! I love how her memories take her back to the earlier years of when the children are young and we miss those days. (So familiar!)
ReplyDeleteLove how the 'accidental' meeting takes place. What to keep reading!
I miss the younger days with my kids, too! Great post and match makers
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