Howdy! Welcome. This week the word prompt is "crush." I am posting another, unedited excerpt from Skip Quincy, Shortstop -- a new book in the Bottom of the Ninth series.
A little background...
In this excerpt, the New York Nighthawks are getting ready to meet the Washington Wolverines in the best of five playoff series. They've just finished their workout and are chowing down before the game. This scene takes place in the dining room.
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Sweat
soaked Skip’s T-shirt. He stopped to down a bottle of water, then got on the
bike for some cardio. Feeling his body perform, work, stretch, grow stronger
stoked his fires. Each session readied him more and more for the contest with
the Washington, D.C., Wolverines. Play-offs were next week. He’d be ready, as
always.
The
men took a break. There was a buffet spread for lunch in their dining room. Bobby
got behind Skip in line.
“What
happened to that Banner chick? You didn’t bring her last night.”
“Right.
I’m taking her out tonight.”
“Big
night?” Bobby nudged him in the ribs and wiggled his eyebrows.
“None
of your beeswax, jerkoff.”
“Just
thinkin’ it might be nice if you got a little, for a change.”
“I’m
gettin’ plenty.”
“Yeah?
From who?” Bobby picked up a plate.
“None
of your damn business.”
“Not
from Francie?” Bobby’s voice rose.
“No
way. She’s like my little sister.” Skip speared a piece of ham and put it on
his dish.
“Good.
Leave her alone.”
“Says
you?”
“Yeah.
She’s too nice for you.”
“Fuck
off. I’ll go out with whoever I want.”
“She’s
get enough problems, without you messing up her head with your dick.”
“That’s
weird, buddy. Very weird.”
“You
know what I mean.”
“Okay,
okay. But if she wants me, who am I to say ‘no’?”
“Don’t
flatter yourself, asshole.”
“She
was comin’ on pretty strong last night.”
“School
girl crush.”
“She
may be goin’ to school, but she’s no schoolgirl.”
“Yeah?”
“Yeah.
Hell, she’s twenty-six.”
“So?”
“Back
off, Bobby. She’s a big girl. She can take care of herself.”
“As
long as you stay away from her brother, I’m good.”
“It’s
none of your business.”
The
two men had filled their plates to overflowing with ham, roast beef, baked
potatoes, brussel sprouts and salad. They took their places at the table.
“If
you think I’m such a bad guy, why don’t you sit somewhere else?” Skip scowled
at his friend.
“I
don’t think you’re a bad guy. But Francie is Elena’s best friend.”
“Hey,
I’m not about to hurt her. She’s fun. We have a good time, kidding around and
stuff.”
“She
flirts with you.”
“So
do a lot of women. Doesn’t mean anything,” Skip said, slicing his meat.
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Love it! Your dialog between the players is always great. So realistic.
ReplyDeleteLove this dialogue! Their interaction entreats me to keep reading.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene. As the others have said, well-written natural dialogue. Looking forward to me.
ReplyDeletegreat interaction between them!
ReplyDeleteGreat scene and interaction between these two. I feel like I'm standing right behind them listening to two real guys.
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