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The day Rick dreaded arrived all too
soon. The carnival! The kissing booth had preyed on his mind. Some of the women
would be attractive and kissing them would be a breeze. But what about the ones
who weren’t? God forbid he made someone feel bad. In the old days, he wouldn’t
give a damn, but now he had been tuned in to feelings in a new way. Couldn’t he
pretend the woman he had to kiss was Miss America? But the truth about his
acting skills was that he simply wasn’t that good.
What if an ugly woman had bought twenty-five tickets?
He’d pass out, that’s all. Holler, “Call 911” and keel over in a dead faint.
That was his escape plan, and it gave him some peace. At least the booth was
only open in the afternoon. He awoke to a lovely day and frowned to see his
prayers for a sudden tornado or hurricane had not been answered. Only
torrential rain could save him from a fate worse than death –kissing strange
women. And what if they didn’t know about his accident and were horrified and
repulsed when they saw him in the flesh? He shuddered. He’d quit. He’d just
walk away.
He retrieved the newspaper from his
front porch. Rifling through to get to the weather report, his dismay grew when
he read, “sunny, high of eighty-five, zero chance of rain.” He thought about
the road leading out of town, the one that snaked along the river. He and Ollie
could be packed up in an hour. Nope, no running away. He had to do it. He had
sworn a dozen times he’d get Mindy for signing him up for this.
Breaker Winslow rises from the dead. Who’d
a thought he’d play the heartthrob again?
I can feel his dread about the kissing booth and I love that he checks outside and the weather report praying for rain. Great job!
ReplyDeleteLove that he wants to escape!
ReplyDeleteThis made me laugh out loud: "What if an ugly woman had bought twenty-five tickets? He’d pass out, that’s all. Holler, “Call 911” and keel over in a dead faint."
This is a fantastic job of making us feel that looming sensation of dread hanging over him. Love the humor, too!
ReplyDeleteI can feel his growing apprehension and his strong urge to run away. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great snippet filled with humor and apprehension. Well done!
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