Scent of Love
“Bryce, Bryce…isn’t that
the most beautiful name? He must be sooo handsome.” Chrissy danced around the kitchen, waving a
dish towel.
“Get to dryin’, missy,”
Jory said, dipping her hands back into sudsy water.
“You’re just jealous
because they ran out of names before they got to you.”
“You were the first one
in line.”
“I know,” she beamed. “I
love being first.”
Jory laughed as she
handed another clean dish to her kid sister.
“First thing tomorrow I’m
going to buy some pretty stationary. Maybe something perfumed.”
“Buy it by the piece.”
“Is that a shot?”
Chrissy scowled at her sister. Their aunt, Nancy Gorman, joined them.
“You’re not exactly
known for your follow-through, Chrissy.” Nancy glanced at Jory.
“This isn’t tennis.
When he falls madly in love with me, we’ll be writing reams and reams to each
other. Maybe mother kept some, I’m going to look in the attic.” With that she
disappeared, leaving the K.P. duties to the others. Nancy cocked an eyebrow at
Jory.
“What?”
“Are you going to pick
up after her this time, too?”
“What do you mean?”
“When she grows tired
of writing to this young Marine. Are you
going to step in, like you always do since your folks passed?”
“I don’t have the heart
to let the poor guy wait for letters that won’t be coming. I’ll let him down
easy.”
“How long do you think before
Chrissy moves on?”
“You a betting woman?”
“Five bucks says she
doesn’t make it two weeks.”
“You’re on.” Jory
pulled the plug and the dirty water ran down the drain.
That's even a bet I'd take. Chrissy seems so shallow and self-absorbed.
ReplyDeleteI'm missing something. How does Lindsay know Chrissy seems shallow ....
ReplyDeleteI`d take that bet as well!
ReplyDeleteInteresting. Why do I feel that things will be different this time around?
ReplyDeleteLove the power that comes over about all three women in this scene, and the underlying emotions.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I feel like I'm right there and the action is happening all around me.
ReplyDeleteI like the homey activity while they talk.
ReplyDeleteLove the pacing of the dialogue
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