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Welcome to the blog where writers write to a word prompt. This week the word prompt is "quaint". I have another excerpt from my work-in-progress titled, "Someone Like You." When you finished, hop on over to read the works by the other authors. You'll find them HERE.
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Tom opened the quaint little cookie
tin, and sat it in the middle of the kitchen table. They took
their usual seats at the table.
“Well,” Tom said, fiddling with his spoon trying
to swallow the lump in his throat.
“I’m moving out, Pop,” Charlie blurted out.
He looked up, his eyes wide. “You what?”
“I’m sorry, but it’s time.”
Tom laughed. “I was going to say the same
thing to you!”
“What?” Charlie stared. “What do you
mean?”
“I’m selling the house and moving to
Florida. I’m going to live with my sister. Helene needs help and can’t afford
much. So I’m going to sell and move in with her. Doctor told me I have to stop
working. Ticker trouble.” Tom avoided Charlie’s stare.
“When did all this happen?” She asked.
“Today.”
“Today? Really?”
“The doctor has been
telling me to cut back. To lose weight, eat healthy, and stuff.”
“I know that.”
“He said the winter here isn’t good for me.
I should move to a warmer climate.”
“That’s probably true for three-fourths of
the population here,” she murmured.
“Then I spoke to Helene today. She didn’t
want to call me, but she’s at the end of her rope. She can’t walk too good. She
doesn’t have the money to hire help. I figured my moving down there would be
good for both of us.”
“You’re going to sell the house?” Charlie asked.
“Yep. It’s paid up. I need the cash. It’s
about time you lived on your own, anyway.”
Charlie burst out laughing. “That’s exactly
what I was going to tell you. I’ve been saving up. I found a sublet. I'll find a new place in the fall.”
Tom wiped the sweat off his forehead. He let out a sigh of relief and smiled. “That’s good news.”
“Are you sure you can get along with
Helene?” Charlie asked.
“She’s not quite so high and mighty now
she needs help,” he said with a chuckle. “I ain’t leavin’ you with nothin’. I savin' a bit from what you made and put it in a safe place.It’s grown. So you’ll have a nestegg to get you started.”
Charlie’s eyes watered. “You did that?”
“I knew you’d need your own money
someday,” he said, struggling to keep the tremor out of
his voice.
“Oh, Pop!” Charlie burst into tears and
leaped up from the table.
When her father stood, she threw herself
into his arms.
Heartwarming scene. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThis is great news. I was worried what his reaction was going to be to her moving out, and here he is making a big change as well. Also, love the nest egg!
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