Welcome! We have a less controversial episode from "The Painting" today. I hope this story doesn't offend you. It's a complex story and much will be revealed later on. I may discontinue this story within a week or two because it does push the envelope regarding prejudice.
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She
arrived at the dog run with five minutes to spare. She didn’t see him, so she
took a seat on a bench near the gate.
“You’re early,” a masculine voice
broke into her thoughts. She turned to see Reid Carpenter Clark.
“Where’s the painting?” She tilted
her chin up to make eye contact.
“I told you I thought we ought to
share it. Since I brought it home in first class, I thought I should get the
first turn.”
“This is ridiculous.”
“Not really. It cost me extra to
bring it home without a scratch. I thought a month would do.”
“What?”
“I’ll keep it a month, then you can
have it for a month.”
“This is crazy.”
He pulled out his wallet then sat his
tall frame down next to her. He counted out ten one-hundred dollar bills. “Here
you go. Your bounty.”
She pushed his hand away. “I don’t
want the money. I want the painting. I saw it first. I bought it first.”
“Perhaps. But I have it now.
Technically, I could force you to take me to court. I’m sure a judge would
think a profit of eight hundred dollars on what some would consider a mediocre piece
of art should make you happy.”
“It’s not about the money. I’ll give
you your hundred bucks back.”
“I don’t want the money.”
“Neither do I,” she said.
“Really?” He turned away from her.
“You think because I’m Jewish I’d
take the money? Is that it?”
“The thought did cross my mind.”
“Why you dirty son-of-a-bitch!” She
shoved his shoulder. He almost fell off the bench. “You antisemitic piece of
crap!” Her blood boiled.
“Sorry,” he mumbled and moved away.
“That’s all you can say? I
want that painting. It’s mine.”
He stood in silence.
“I’ll keep it for a month. Then you
can have it for a month.”
“That’s the dumbest thing I ever
heard.”
“I’ve got an idea. Why don’t you
reproduce it?” he asked. “That way we can both have it.”
“What?”
“You’re an artist, aren’t you?”
“Yeah. How did you know?”
“Looked you up on Google.”
“So?” She shifted on the bench,
moving over to let him sit down again.
“Sorry about the comment. My
upbringing,” he said, easing down next to her.
“Yeah, well that's an excuse when you’re nine-years-old. But not at this age.?”
“I’ll give you the painting if you
produce a copy for me.”
“You want me to copy the painting?”
“Do whatever you artists call it.” He
crossed his legs.
“But I get paid for painting.”
“Pay you?”
“You want me to put aside paying
business to reproduce that painting.”
“Okay, then how about the thousand
dollars?”
“How about three?”
He raised his eyebrows. “Three
thousand dollars for a painting that cost two hundred originally?”
“Yep. That’s my price.”
“Shylock,” he muttered, reaching into
his back pocket.
She slapped him across the face. Reid
bolted from the bench.
“Don’t you ever call me that again. I
get paid a lot of money for my artwork.”
He rubbed his jaw. “That’s assault.”
“Yeah? Call the cops. I’ll tell them you stole my painting.”
“Good luck with that.” He continued to rub his
jaw.
“I didn’t hit you that hard.”
He approached the bench slowly. “So
do we have a deal?”
That's all for today. Thanks for stopping by.
This story is fascinating and filled with anger and anguish. My heart goes out to both characters whose upbringing has brought them to this impasse. I hope they can reconcile their differences, but in the current climate in the world, I doubt that will be easy to do. People judging people on the basis of religion and color seems to be worse than ever. Looking forward to seeing what comes next.
ReplyDeleteThe animosity runs deep. I hope she watches out with the physicality and that he doesn't get the law involved against her. It seems like that could bring it to a point of no return.
ReplyDeleteGood use of the word prompt this week. Both had tempers boiling.
ReplyDeleteThe emotions in this excerpt are so powerful and raw. I was sucked in and was feeling what they were. Great job!
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