“Wife
still away?” Jen asked.
“Yeah.”
“When is
she coming back?”
“A
couple of months,” he mumbled, hoping she’d drop the subject.
“Oh.
That must be tough.”
“It’s
her ‘chance of a lifetime’. A foot in the door to scriptwriting.”
“Wow, that’s exciting.”
Studying her face, he saw the first glimmer of anything other than
sadness or nervousness since he’d met her. “You a writer?”
“Not
really,” she said, glancing down at the dogs and blushing. “I mean not yet. But
once Stan gets better. Well, he’s going to help me. I’ve outlined a book.
Fiction. Stan’s going to help me write it.”
“He is?”
“He’s a
famous writer. Maybe you’ve heard of him? Stan Hogan? His book, Destiny Becomes Her won the Pulitzer ten
years ago. He’s published mostly thrillers since then.”
“I don’t
read literary fiction. But thrillers. Any made into movies?”
She
nodded, her face softening, her voice filled with pride. “He’s done the Miller
Shade series.”
“Miller
Shade? Like in Unmasked?”
She
nodded, sporting a wide grin. “That’s him.”
“Oh,
wow! I loved that movie. Clare will be impressed that I met you.”
“He’s a
great writer. And he said he’d help me.”
“There
you go. Gives him a reason to get it together and get better.”
“Sure
does.”
He
glanced at his watch. “I’ve got to go. Nice talking to
you. Come on Queenie.”
Her face
clouded. She grabbed his arm.
“He is, you know. He is going to get better. He is going to wake up. He is. He has to. He promised me. He is.” Her voice rose with every sentence and her eyes filled. He gripped her arms.
“Of
course, he is.” He made eye contact anyway.
She
brushed at a tear, nodded, and backed out of his grasp. Tugging on the
leash, she steered Willie in the opposite direction.
Terry
returned home and fed Queenie then headed for the subway. As he rode
to work, he thought about Jen Hogan. Her pride in her husband touched him. Does
Clare feel that way about me? He hadn’t won a big prize or anything, but he
pulled down a damn nice living. The blonde’s tears seemed genuine, like hope fighting
with logic. Powerless to help, he wished he’d said something comforting.
What could you say to a woman whose beloved husband might die? Nothing good –or
meaningful, either. It was damn scary.
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Great use of the word prompt this week as always. I really like this story. He's so compassionate with her and I feel bad for him that is wife is not very concerned about the marriage.
ReplyDeleteYou have a stunning story here. Both of these characters have mates but are suddenly pretty much alone. It really grabs the reader to want to see what happens. They seem so real.
ReplyDeleteAmazing snippet. Such a great story you have going here!
ReplyDeleteI love Jen’s pride in her husband and her faith that he’ll get better. Their brief meetings tell so much about their history. Great job!!
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