Howdy! Welcome to Tuesday Tales, where writers write fiction stories to word prompts. This week the word prompt is "mint." We have another episode of "The Kicker's Story, Part One." Again from Dale's pov.
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“Seriously.
A kicker’s career can be real short. You know. One injury, a badly turned
ankle, and you’re done.”
“True.”
“I don’t have any other skills, so I
have to save money. It’s gotta take me through my old age.”
He pulled up in front of a modest
five story apartment building, not what she expected. He parked on the
street. When he unlocked his front door, her
nerves kicked up. What had she done? She turned, but he
grabbed her arm.
“What are you doing?” he asked.
“This is a mistake. Please take me
home. I’ll deal with the car tomorrow,” she said, staring at his hand gripping
her arm.
He dropped it. “Hey, look. It’s okay.
Really. Honestly. Come on. Don’t be silly. If you’re late tomorrow, you’ll get
docked.”
Robbie was right. The General Manager
was a real stickler about showing up on time. Trapped, her eyes
grew moist.
“Hey! Tears? Come on. I’m not the big
bad wolf, I promise.” He took her in his arms. “You’re trembling. You’re really
scared of me?”
“Uh, no. Yes. Well, maybe.”
Robbie held her close and stroked her
hair. She nestled her face into his shoulder. Not usually one to lose her cool,
Dale struggled to keep it together. Robbie led her into his
apartment.
Just as he said, it was a spacious
one-bedroom with a sofabed in the living room. Dale took a deep breath and let
it out. At least he told the truth about that. She bet it was in mint
condition, too. Most of the women who stayed there sure didn’t sleep in the
living room!
She chuckled.
“What’s funny?”
“Nothing. You told me the
truth.”
“Of course. Why would I lie?”
“Don’t you lie to women all the time?”
He shrugged. “I don’t call it lying.
I tell them what they want to hear.”
“That you’re the love of their life?”
“No. That they are the only one – and
in that moment, they are.”
Dale whistled. “Wow. That’s pretty
outrageous.”
“It’s true. I’m not thinking
about other women when I’m with whoever I’m with.”
“Really?” She cocked an eyebrow.
“Rhonda works in a beauty salon and
likes cheese. Valerie is a paralegal with red hair who loves hamburgers.”
“You’ve categorized them by what they
do and what they like to eat?”
He shook his head. “You’ve got this all wrong. I’m not a man who destroys women. I love women.”
“Lots and lots of women.” She stared
at him.
“Is there a limit
on how many women a man can love? Is there a set number. And after that you
become, what?”
“A man-whore?”
He laughed. “I don’t break hearts.
Most of the women get their little thrill having an affair with a famous
football player. When they discover I’m just ordinary, they move on.”
Interesting take on his attitude toward women. Greate scene.
ReplyDeleteI love this whole scene-- her anxious emotions and realization that he didn't lie to her, her calling it like it is and the sweet boyishness of his viewpoint about his many pairings with women. There is a touch of loneliness showing in his final words. Great job.
ReplyDeleteHe cracks me up with his complete lack of self-awareness. LOL! Good job as I know some people like this in real life. Very realistic!
ReplyDeleteI love that he does remember who they are. At the beginning I thought he was a live them and leave them type. I’m warming up to him!
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