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“Tyler,
breakfast!” His mother called. He shoved the pillow over his head. “Waffles!”
The scent of his
mother’s famous waffles slipped under his door and seduced his nose. He poked
his head out, like a turtle, and threw back the covers. Yanking a robe from the
hook on the back of his door, he pulled it on and flew down the stairs and into
the kitchen.
His eyes went
right to the waffle iron, where a small wisp of steam rose. He licked his lips
and plopped down in his usual chair. Uncle Charlie with his bushy white brows
and thinning hair chewed as his fork stood poised to drop another delectable
piece of sour cream waffle into his mouth. With his free hand, he pushed the
bottle of real maple syrup toward his nephew.
Since when could
his mother afford real maple syrup? Guilt landed in the pit of his stomach. Now
Tyler was unemployed, he wouldn’t be sending home a couple hundred bucks
every month as usual. It would be damn hard to break the news to his mother.
“One or two?” his
mother asked, breaking into his thoughts.
“Two. Definitely
two,” he said
“I hear Merrily
Adams is back for the holiday,” Marge said.
“Yeah?” He bit
back “who cares” stuck on his tongue, waiting to come out.
“I think it’s nice
she comes back to have Christmas with her family.”
“Where else is she
gonna go, Ma, the Riviera? Everyone goes home for Christmas.”
His mother made a
noise and shrugged.
“What your mother
means is maybe you should call her.”
“I know what she
means. I chose to ignore it.”
“Could it hurt? I
mean you and she were sure close enough in high school.”
“That’s light
years ago, Ma.”
“She’s still smart
and pretty.”
“And successful
enough to buy and sell me a hundred times over,” came flying out of his mouth.
“She isn’t married,”
Charlie said.
“Yeah. She could
do a lot worse than you, ya know.”
“Gee thanks, Ma.
With a ringing endorsement like that I’m surprised she’s not over here and down
on one knee.”
Ha! Such great humor in this excerpt. And also may I say I love the name Merrily!
ReplyDeleteLove the sarcasm. Great scene. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHe's a corker with great humor! I especially love this line: “That’s light years ago, Ma.”
ReplyDeleteLOL At that last line. Love it. I also liked this line: He poked his head out, like a turtle--- it made for a cool visual.
ReplyDelete"The scent of his mother’s famous waffles slipped under his door and seduced his nose." You have such a masterful way of writing. I'm loving this story!
ReplyDeleteI love their banter. And now I am craving waffles! Great job!
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