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Sarah moseyed over to the ribbons. She loved the colors, bright pinks and turquoises, and some in a delicate lavender shade, too.
“He’s free. Go right on back, Mrs. Tanner.” Virginia showed Abigail the way. Sarah fingered the satin ribbons, enjoying the smooth feel of the fabric. The bell over the front door tinkled. She looked up and dropped the ribbon on the floor. Benjamin Fitch stood crowding the doorway with his powerful frame.
Flustered,
she bent to pick it up and knocked her head against a table when she attempted
to stand.
“Are you
hurt, Miss Chesney?”
She looked
up to find Ben standing within a foot or two, his brows knitted, his expression
concerned. Rubbing her temple, she straightened and gave a small curtsy. “I’m
fine, Mr. Fitch. Thank you for asking.” She raised her gaze to his. He looked
fine, dressed in black breeches, blue waistcoat and white shirt. She noticed
the blue was the same shade as his eyes.
His stare
reflected warmth for a moment before icing over. “Very well.” He brushed by her
to the counter, where Mrs. Rhodes awaited.
Too
disconcerted to listen, she only heard a buzz as he presented his order to
Virginia Rhodes. The deep timbre of his voice vibrated through her, sending a
tiny thrill down her spine. She’d always loved the sound of him, and that
hadn’t changed.
As she
caught her breath, her mother returned to the shop. Mrs. Rhodes had packed up
their goods. Abby shouldered one bag and gave the other to Sarah.
“Good day,
Mrs. Rhodes,” Abby said.
“Good day,
Mrs. Tanner, Miss Chesney.”
Benjamin
turned toward her for a second. She swore there was the ghost of a smile on his
handsome face. He tipped his hat again. She nodded and smiled. She simply
couldn’t help it.
They hurried
out of the store and back to the Inn. Sarah’s thoughts swirled around her
encounter with Ben. Had he been happy to see her? She thought so. But maybe she
shouldn’t presume anything. Get her hopes up. He was simply being polite, as
any well-bred young man would be. Nothing more, nothing less, right?
“Ben seemed
almost happy to see you, Sarah,” Abigail said.
“Really? You
think so?”
“You still
care for him, don’t you?”
“I can’t
help it. Ben’s a good person. Underneath. He’s not like his father, more
compassionate, like his mother.”
Abby smiled.
“You’re just like your father. Always seeing the good in people.”
Love this scene since I can identify with knocking things over and hitting my head. LOL I love the part where Abigail says she's like her father. Looking for the good in people is a wonderful quality to have.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful snippet! Boy can I relate to knocking things over and bumping my head. =D
ReplyDeleteAww so sweet. I love these kinds of stories.
ReplyDeleteAh! I love this interaction. I hope he cares for her as much as she does for him. Great job!
ReplyDeleteLove it. Brilliant wording, the way his stare iced over, how she loved the sound of his voice. You do such a wonderful job of threading in physical movements, thoughts, and dialogue.
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