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“Let’s go to Beans and Books for lunch and ice cream,” Marty suggested.
Silently they piled into the car. Sophie fell asleep on the way. When Marty turned off the car, Ethan leaned over and shoved his sister in the shoulder.
“Wake up, stupid!”
“Ethan! Don’t talk to
your sister that way,” Jen said.
Sophie opened her
eyes and burst into tears. She slugged her brother’s arm. He hit her back and
World War Three broke out in the backseat. Jen tried to interfere but was
helpless in the front seat. She got out, opened the back door, and pulled Ethan
away from his sister. Marty grabbed Sophie and carried her through the stifling
heat of the hot August day into the air-conditioned restaurant. They took an
empty booth with one child on each side and not sitting directly across from
each other.
“Ethan, gotta tell
you, buddy. Guys, good guys, men-type guys don’t hit girls. They don’t hit
little kids, and they don’t hit their sisters - ever.”
“She was being a
pain.”
“Maybe. But you’ve
gotta your use words. You didn’t hurt her, but you could have. So don’t do it
again, okay?”
Ethan hung his head,
but mumbled, “Okay.”
Jen trained big eyes
on Marty. Did he overstep? Wasn’t he going to be their father? Wasn’t it his
job to tell Ethan–as a role model and all?
“Thank you.” Jen
reached over and squeezed his hand.
They ordered burgers and ice cream sodas. The
rumble of thunder meant rain, and a welcome relief from the intense
humidity.
“How about after
lunch, we go home, turn on the ceiling fan and watch a movie? I’ll set up the
new TV. I think we can all fit on the new sofa?”
“Great idea! Yes, we
can,” Jen said.
Love this scene. With two boys and a girl, it's one I've lived through many times. Excellent and realistic.Great job.
ReplyDeleteI love his natural way with fathering the children. It seems to be an innate part of his character, and he shines at it.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely scene! So realistic.
ReplyDeleteI loved this scene, seeing them all interact as a family so realistically. As in all families, there's the good moments - and the not so pleasant. I really enjoy seeing how he relates to the kids and is so kind hearted.
ReplyDeleteI love how they turned into a little family. And Marty is an amazing role model. Great job!
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