New York City,
Upper East Side of Manhattan
Thrusting his hand in his pocket, Mike Sullivan made
sure the little box from the jewelers was there. Of course, Amy might prefer to
pick out her own ring, but she’d been hinting around about marriage for so long
he guessed any ring would be welcomed.
On his way to the hair salon to pick up his girl, his
phone dinged. It was a text saying they had been backed up and she was behind
schedule. Already halfway there, he kept going.
His stomach became queasy. Was proposing to Amy a good
idea? Good, old reliable Amy. Bill, his buddy, had made a case for her. He’d
pointed out how dependable she was, how down to Earth, rock solid, predictable.
She’d never surprise him with something unpleasant, like screwing around. Mike
gave a short laugh. Nope, Amy would never cheat on him because he doubted
anyone would ask.
It wasn’t that she wasn’t a beauty, though she put out
a lot of effort and came damn close. The woman had no sexual heat, but she was dependable
as hell. He knew, when he got home from work, dinner would be on the table
fifteen minutes later –every single night. As he stood waiting for a red light
to change, Bill’s words echoed in his head.
“What do you expect? Marriage is about give and take.
You want someone who’s gonna be there to raise your kids. Pick ‘em up from
school every day. Cook dinner. Amy’s an excellent cook.”
He was right about that. Amy could cook like a gourmet
chef. Mike frowned.
“You’re not still mooning over that flaky chick from
Fire Island, are you?” Bill had asked.
“You mean Heather?”
“Yeah. That’s the one. It’s fuckin’ five years
already. You’ve looked everywhere for her. She’s gone, buddy. You need a
dependable girl, like Amy. Get married. Have a couple of kids.”
“What about happiness?” Mike had asked.
“Much overrated,” Bill had said and shook his head.
Mike paled.
Wow! I feel sorry for Bill. Hope Mike makes the right decision. Amy deserves to be married for love not dependability.
ReplyDeleteNo!!! Mike needs to go with his heart and not settle like Bill wants him to. I could feel the inner conflict brewing in him. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a nail biter! Will Mike eventually fall in love with Amy or find "the one who got away"?
ReplyDeleteThis makes me incredibly sad. For Mike and Amy. They both deserve so much more... love.
ReplyDeleteOh man! This was such a sad and powerful excerpt. Well done.
ReplyDeleteLove the deep conflict and look forward to seeing how he proceeds. Poor Amy!
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