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Mike looked at the pretty, young woman. What she was presenting was ridiculous. About to raise his hand for the check, he remembered what awaited him at home. The empty room haunted him. Yes, his sister had cleaned out all of Patty’s stuff. But he still felt her presence there. He’d tucked away her favorite bear, Briny, in the closet.
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Mike looked at the pretty, young woman. What she was presenting was ridiculous. About to raise his hand for the check, he remembered what awaited him at home. The empty room haunted him. Yes, his sister had cleaned out all of Patty’s stuff. But he still felt her presence there. He’d tucked away her favorite bear, Briny, in the closet.
And the
room still had her sweet scent. His wife and his little daughter, just six and
the light of his life died in a car crash two years ago. Mike had gone to
therapy. He’d taken a long trip, tried everything to forget, but there was no
way he could ever forget her shining smile, and effervescent personality.
He sat
back. He’d listen to Cassie for a while longer. As crazy as her idea was, it kept
him from going home. He ordered another drink. Maybe by the time,
he’d be tired enough to sleep without waking up and ending up in her empty
room.
“Sorry,
my mind wandered. What were you saying?” She had grown
more beautiful over the years. And the shy little tomboy now flashed
significant cleavage his way. Who was he to ignore what was on display? That
would be rude, wouldn’t it?
As he
watched her explain her dream, her lively expression, broad smile, and sexy
body sucked him in. Maybe he’d shuffle back a few years and get what he’d
wanted so bad ten years ago -- one glorious roll in the hay with hot, little Cassie
Newsome. Maybe she’d make him forget what he had lost that stormy day in February.
He took her hand in his, and focused on her words. Could
something this totally insane save him? Who was he to doubt Cassie’s ambition
and determination? Damn it. She turned him on.
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Now I feel so sorry for him. I sure hope she's up front about the whole thing and doesn't hurt the poor guy.
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet! I hope she's up front as well.
ReplyDeleteI love the description of his pain and his self-involved plans for her. Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteI love the slight twist you used to work the picture prompt in. It's a great snippet with a lot of emotion, filling us in on the story in only 300 words.
ReplyDeleteHis memories of his wife and daughter break my heart. But I love how he is brought back to the current conversation by a flash of cleavage. Loved it!
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