This week, we go back to Trunk Mahoney and Carla from the First & Ten series. This is from the book I'm writing now, "Overtime", the last book in the series that will tie up all the stories of the men playing for the Connecticut Kings.
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From "Overtime":
Carla pulled the hot pasta dish from
the oven. She stuck her head outside and hollered.
“Al! Dinner! Come and get it!”
She set the table, putting the main
course on a dish towel. She checked her watch again. It wasn’t like him to be late
for a meal. She smiled as she recalled the many compliments he lavished on her
cooking. She wiped her hands on her apron and looked out back. When she glanced
at the barn, she was surprised to find the door closed. Smoke was seeping out
from under, and through cracks where the old wooden windows no longer met the
frames.
Panic seized her.
“Al!” She cried, taking off at a
gallop for the barn.
Her pulse thudded in her ears, her
breathing was rapid as her body went into crisis mode. Carla shook her head. Can’t panic now! She pulled on the door, but it was stuck. She took a deep breath and
marshaled all her strength, yanking on the old piece of wood. It flew open knocking
her to the ground. She jumped to her feet, only to be hit in the face by a
tornado of black smoke. She started choking immediately. Turning away, she
cleared her lungs. She heard someone coughing.
“Al? Al?”
“Here,” came a weak voice.
“I’m coming.”
With one hand, she felt in her
pockets for her phone, with the other she fanned smoke away, clearing a path as
she searched for her husband.
Her fingers dialed 911.
“Help! The barn is burning and Al’s
trapped inside!.”
She gave the address. “Hurry, my
husband’s in here, but
Just as she dropped her phone into
the apron pocket, she tripped over Trunk, and fell, bruising her
ribs, forcing the air out of her lungs.
What?! Holy cow, I hope they get Al out in time!!
ReplyDeleteWow! What a scene. Can't wait to find out what happened.
ReplyDeleteWow! What a scene. Can't wait to find out what happened.
ReplyDeleteOh no! Very dramatic!
ReplyDeleteWhat a cliffhanger! Good work!
ReplyDeleteOh, no. You left us hanging, once again. I hope the firefighters get there in time.
ReplyDeleteYou packed a lot of punch and wallop into this 300 words!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I was on the edge of my seat.
You packed a lot of punch and wallop into this 300 words!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I was on the edge of my seat.
Oh my gosh, how harrowing to find her husband in that potentially deadly situation.
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