Jory
walked up the hill. She plopped down among the daisies and buttercups. Her pug,
Mickey, trotted along after stopping to sniff a tree. He curled up next to her
and snored. She picked a daisy and counted off the petals doing the traditional
“he loves me.”
She
threw down the flower. “What are you doing, Jory? You idiot. He doesn’t love
you and you’d better not love him.” Mickey opened his eyelids and yawned.
“Okay,
okay.You’re right, I was stupid to write him those letters. I should have let
Cassie pay for her own mistake. Signing up to write to a lonely guy in the
service. She’s such an idiot.” Jory shook her head. She trudged over the grassy
field until she found a group of Tiger Lilies pushing toward the sun. She knelt
down and snapped a few shots.
Jory
laughed as Mickey ran in circles. Her stomach grumbled so she headed back to
the cottage. Her aunt Sue was in the kitchen, making sandwiches.
“Out
talking to Mickey again?”
“He’s
a good listener.”
Sue
laughed. “Did he solve all your problems?”
“What
problems?”
“Umm,
let’s see, a tall, blond, blind man named Bryce, for example?”
I don't know which I love better, the scene you gave us or the picture of Mr. Pug looking so happy.
ReplyDeleteLoved it! The interaction between the heroine and her pug is adorable.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting. . .nice to know others interact with their dogs like that.
ReplyDeleteI love the interaction between Jory and her pug...so realistic. who doesn't take their pet into their confidence?
ReplyDeleteI agree with everyone else, love the conversation with Mickey. I like how you added the details of the specific flowers she was taking pictures of.
ReplyDeleteI love that she talks it out with her pet. I do that and I bet you do as you walk Homer, right?
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting excerpt, which story is it from?
ReplyDeleteLoved the interaction between her and her dog. The description of the setting had me looking through her eyes. Great scene.
ReplyDeleteProbably sounds like a broken record, but yes the conversation was nicely done indeed. Now tell us about Bryce!
ReplyDeleteLove your pug and dogs are great listeners.
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