Welcome! This week the word prompt is "bug." We have the beginning of a new story. One a little more cheerful than the last. The title is "Some Kind of Wonderful." Yes, after the song of the same name. We go back to little Pine Grove for this one. Scroll down to return to the great stories on Tuesday Tales. Thanks for stopping by.
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Pine
Grove, NY
As
he pulled away from the stoplight on Main Street, a car in the opposite lane
honked at him, repeatedly. An attractive woman with short dark hair and eyes
the size of dark chocolate truffles, rolled down her window.
“Excuse
me. Excuse me!” Her eyebrows came together.
Jeff
hit the brakes. “What?”
“Can
you tell me where Maple Street is?”
“Sure.
Turn around. Go for three lights…” but the honking of a car behind him shut
Jeff up. With a frown he motioned. “Pull over.”
Jeff
steered onto the shoulder. The woman in the spunky red car waited for two cars
to pass, then did a u-turn, parked behind him, and got out.
“Where
are you going?”
“I’m
looking for the Andrews house. Grey Andrews? Know him?”
“Of
course. He’s our Town Supervisor. He’s got a big Victorian on Maple. Go this
way down Main for three lights. Turn left, then make the first right. He’s
about three houses down.” Jeff gestured as he spoke.
“Great.
Thanks. My GPS stopped working.”
“Yeah.
If you don’t have Internet or the right service, you phone will die in Pine
Grove.”
“Swell.”
She checked her watch. “Is there some place to eat around here?”
“There’s Homer’s, right near the lake.”
“A
lake?”
“Yeah.
Cedar Lake. It’s beautiful. I’m going there to meet my mom. Why don’t you
follow me?”
“Thanks.
I appreciate it.”
“I’m
Jeff Barrett, by the way.” He offered his hand.
“I’m
Jackie Stone.” She took it.
Jeff
got in his car and took a long look at her in the rearview mirror. About five
foot six, slender, but wow, yeah, where she curved, she curved nicely. His
phone dinged. It was Susan.
Sorry to miss your dad’s funeral. Can’t
get Monday off. Love, Susan
He
jammed his phone in his pocket. Love? Really? Her text bugged him. He frowned and turned the
ignition. Grumbling to himself, he pulled out onto Main Street. Jackie did the
same.
What
was a pretty girl like her doing going to the Andrews’ house? Grey was married
to a smokin’ hot woman and had two kids. He glanced down at the dashboard. One
fifteen, his mom would already be at the restaurant and not happy with his
being late. At least he had a good excuse –being a good “neighbor” to a
stranger to Pine Grove.
He opened the door and followed her inside.
“My mom’s already here. She’s got a table for four.
Why don’t you join us?”
“Oh, really, I couldn’t barge in. You’re having lunch
with your mother?” She raised her eyebrows.
A dozen explanations crowded his tongue. “I’m here for
my father’s funeral on Monday.”
Lovely beginning! The cell service in Pine Grove sounds like the cell service in my neck of the woods.
ReplyDeleteWell done. Sad reason to be in town though. Looking forward to more.
ReplyDeleteVery nice job with their meeting. This will be an interesting story and I am looking forward to more! Love this line-- A dozen explanations crowded his tongue.
ReplyDeleteAwww, I love that you named the restaurant Homer's. I love this beginning - and their meeting.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jillian on the restaurant name! So awesome! I am dying to know more about the relationship he has with parents and the woman texting. Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jillian on the restaurant name! So awesome! I am dying to know more about the relationship he has with parents and the woman texting. Can't wait to read more!
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