Welcome! This week we're writing to the word prompt "pink." I'm interrupting "The Chase" to start a new story.
Note: if reading about the pandemic is upsetting, do not continue reading this stoy.
A story of sacrifice, fear, heroism, loss and, ultimately, love. Yes it takes place during the coronavirus pandemic we're living in now. I hope it won't upset anyone to read this. The story came to me and was so compelling, I had to write it. It's aptly named, "Unforgettable."
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Dr. Cary Metcalf slammed into his house and took
the stairs to the bedroom two at a time. He yanked a suitcase from the
closet and emptied his top two drawers into it. Throwing the closet door open, he
grabbed a handful of jeans and shirts. A hasty folding, then in they went. One
more item – his dopp kit from the bathroom. He added that to the mishmash, and,
with maximum effort, closed it.
“Good luck, son. Stay healthy.” His father's eyes wetted, his cheeks pinked.
“Thanks for taking over, Dad. I'll be fine.” He hugged him.
He locked his front door, dumped the case in the
trunk and got in his car. He set his GPS for an address on West 78th
Street in Manhattan, turned the ignition and sped out of his driveway.
His mind took over. Who was he? Simply a country
doctor. He treated all sorts of complaints and diseases, but he’d never been
part of a rescue team for a pandemic before. At thirty-five years old, he had
experience, a wealth of knowledge, and a calm demeanor. But could he stand up
to the stress of treating hundreds of patients day-after-day and face death
tolls beyond his imagination?
Traffic was light so he pushed the speed limit
until he was doing eighty. Sitting back, searching for a comfort zone, he
talked to himself.
“You’ll do whatever you have to. Hell, you’ve done
ER before. Piece of cake, right?” But his words brought little comfort. He
searched his brain for any experience that could come close to the horrific
situation in New York City and couldn’t come up with one.
His phone rang. Feeling reckless, he answered.
“Cary?”
“Oh, hi, Aunt Sue.”
“Where are you? When do you plan to arrive?”
“I’m in my car now. ETA according to the GPS is
about an hour and a half.”
“Oh, good. I’ve made soup.”
“Great.”
“It’s a wonderful thing you’re doing.”
“Everyone has to do whatever they can, right?”
“Of course. See you soon.”
She clicked off. With
no time to arrange for a hotel room and no idea how long he’d be needed, he’d contacted his widowed aunt. She’s
offered the spare room in her apartment and he’d jumped at it. Back to Tuesday Tales
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I suspect this is going to be a moving story of love and loss. Can't wait to read more! Well done.
ReplyDeleteWow! I'm backdating my work to better times while you're taking the bull by the horns and facing reality. Not sure how this will end, but I wish your doctor well--hope things work out for him and all of NYC.
ReplyDeleteYou are to be commended for tuning into the scariness of the current situation and writing what is speaking to you. Great start of a story!
ReplyDeleteI love that you're able to turn your writing to this terrible pandemic. I'm proud of you. I can barely function in my writing and you're charging forward- well done!!
ReplyDeleteI love the start to your new story! I have a feeling it's going to be very applicable to far to many people. I foresee some love in your tale and hope that this will help others get through these trying days.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a great start! I can’t wait to see what your write. ((Hugs))
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