Welcome! The word prompt this week is "pitch." "Two of Hearts" continues. Ellen and Marcy are Stan's ex-wife and his grown daughter. Thank you for coming. Scroll down to return to Tuesday Tales.
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She arrived at intensive care by nine thirty. Marcy
and Ellen were already there, talking to the doctor. Stan was sitting up. They
had taken the breathing tube out. He gave her a blank look. The head of the bed had been raised to support him. Relief
fought with apprehension in Jen.
She approached the bed. Hesitating a bit, she kissed
the top of his head.
“How are you?” He looked thinner and pale. Dark
brown eyes washed over her.
“And you are?” His voice was hoarse.
“Jen. Your wife.” She clenched her fist to keep
her hand from trembling.
“Oh. I have good taste,” he said, wearing a half
smile.
Marcy’s raised voice caught her attention.
“I can only get permission from Mrs. Hogan,” the
doctor said.
“Permission? For what?” Jen pushed her way between
the two women who blocked her path. She mustered all her strength to focus on the
doctor’s words.
“He’s doing well. We want to monitor him today and
if he continues to do well, we’ll move him to a private room. With your
permission, that is.”
“Of course, Dr. Harrison. Whatever you think is
best.”
“He should stay in intensive care! You don’t know
about his brain. It isn’t safe,” Marcy said, her voice shrill.
“Marcy. I trust Dr. Harrison’s judgment. We will
do what he suggests. Why don’t you go for a walk? Get a cup of coffee?”
“So you can have alone time with dad? Nope. I’m
staying right here.”
“Suit yourself. But I’m calling the shots.”
“Thanks, Mrs. Hogen,” Dr. Harrison said. He shook
her hand and left.
“I’m here. I can hear you,” Stan said, his voice
soft and weak.
Marcy rushed over shoving Jen aside. She watched
as Stan’s daughter took his hand and spoke softly to him.
“I’m thirsty,” he said.
“Get him some water, Jennifer,” Marcy ordered.
A slow burn started in Jen.
“Can I speak to you outside, Marcy?”
“Not while dad’s awake. I almost lost my father.
I’m not going to waste a minute.”
“Then I suggest you backoff and be reasonable. You
are standing next to the water pitcher, cup and straw. I suggest you give him
some water or get out of the way, and I will.”
Marcy shot her a hostile glare, but did fill the
cup and handed it to Stan. His hand shook. He spilled the water all over himself,
and started shouting. Marcy apologized over and over.
“Get away, get away! Let me in there,” Jen said,
tugging on her stepdaughter’s sleeve.
Shaken, the young woman backed up and stood by the
wall. A nurse came in.
“What happened?”
“I’m wet. I’m wet!” Stan shrieked.
“A little water spilled,” Jen corrected.
“No problem. I’ll get a new gown,” the nurse said
and left.
“Marcy, please wait outside.” Jen grabbed a handful of tissues and
dabbed at the water pooled on his lap. The young woman slunk out of the room.
The nurse was back in a flash.
“You don’t have to bother. I’ll get him changed,”
Jen said.
“Thanks,” the nurse said, stopping to take his
pulse. “I’ll be back for vitals in an hour.”
“Come
on, darling, lean forward,” Jen instructed.
Stan looked at her with suspicion, but did as she
asked. Undressing a man in a hospital bed who wore a cast challenged her. Jen mustered all her strength and got it done. Afterward, she fell
back in the chair, exhausted.
“Still thirsty,” he said.
She poured water in the cup, added the straw and
held it to his lips. He drained it.
“More.”
She did it two more times.
“You’ve been out for a while.”
“Out? I have? What
happened?”
Excellent scene. I have a feeling the daughter hasn't always been so "close' to her dad. Full marks to Jen for not losing her cool.
ReplyDeletewow. I am not liking Marcy at all- good for Jen for not smacking the brat! Great tension and emotion in this scene.
ReplyDeleteOh, I do not like Marcy at all. To put on a scene like that in front of everyone to spite Jen. Grr...
ReplyDeleteWow. That Marcy is a real...not nice person.
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